Sneaking Out

[G]disco dancing down at daddios
[C]disco dancing down at [G]daddios
[D]getting busy
with trouble I don’t [G]know

I heard a dude with angry tattoos
I heard a dude with angry tattoos
lookin’ for trouble
I know what to do

[Chorus]
[C]out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out
[C]Doing things that you can’t see I’m sneaking out
[D]taking her with [G]me
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

[bridge]
[F]
[C]
[G]
[D]

behind velvet ropes, a secret back door
behind velvet ropes, a secret back door
the alley cat
shows me how to score
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

1/2/26, 1/3/26, 1/4/26
disco dancing down at daddios
disco dancing down at daddios
getting busy
some trouble I don’t know

I heard a dude with angry tattoos
I heard a dude with angry tattoos
looking for trouble
I know what to do

[Chorus]
[C]out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out
[C]Doing things that you can’t see I’m sneaking out
[D]taking her with [G]me
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

behind velvet ropes, a secret back door
behind velvet ropes, a secret back door
running past the alley cat
showing me how to score
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

seeing all kinds of problems with the 1st verse, it sounds like they’re already together, and you spend the whole second verse explaining the gist of the song. So, maybe the story is still too complicated, yet there’s not enough detail/imagery. what are other reasons to sneak out? avoidance of people (boss, assholes, ex girlfriends, adultery) but this is where you started and the story was too much (remember the waitress at the eatery?)

disco dancing down at daddios
disco dancing down at daddios
getting busy with Marie
as far as we can go

gun toting man, hear he’s looking for me
gun toting man, hear he’s looking for me
I’m getting outta here
there’s nothing to see

dude, you, flew, glue, clue, to, new, knew, sue, to do,
in a neon blur
made me spill my liquor
and disappear in a neon blur
liquior, heard, hers, hurt

01/01/26

Behind velvet ropes and ripped up pantyhose
disco dancing down at Daddio‘s
her mascara eyes
are ready to go
Why? Hint why? Or don’t tell it all right away?
you just made the song about her.

behind velvet ropes her ripped up pantyhose

12/31/25 chorus still felt a little too abbreviated.

[G]Disco dancing, down at Daddy O’s
[C]Disco dancing, down at Daddy [G]O’s
[D]her mascara eyes
[NC]beg me to drive her [G]home

where’s is her date, ain’t treating her right
where’s is her date, ain’t treating her right
she should be with me
bee my queen tonight

[Chorus]
[C]out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out
[C]Doing things that you can’t see I’m sneaking out
taking her with [G]me
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out
[D]Doing things [C]you can’t see
[D]sneaking out, taking her with [G]me
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

following me, a hidden back door
following me, a hidden back door
your not gonna see
see me see me score
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

[Chorus]

12/30/25

[G]Disco dancing, down at Daddy O’s
[C]Disco dancing, down at Daddy [G]O’s
[D]mascara eyes
beg me to drive her [G]home

where’s is her date, ain’t treating her right
where’s is her date, ain’t treating her right
she should be with me
bee my queen tonight

[Chorus]
[C]out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out
[C]Doing things that you can’t see I’m sneaking out
[D]taking her with [G]me
[G]sneaking out sneaking out
[C]out sneaking out sneaking
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

she’s following me, a hidden back door
she’s following me, a hidden back door
your not gonna see
see me see me score
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

[Chorus]


can change/reverse chords in chorus to sound different from verse?

[Chorus]
[G]Sneaking out sneaking out, I won’t be seen
[C]Sneaking out sneaking out, I won’t be [G]seen
[D] Doing things [C]that you can’t see
[D]sneaking out and taking her with…
[G]sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out sneaking out

12/29/25

replace verses to say something more specific

[G]disco dancing
down at Big Daddy O’s
[C]girls with boyfriends
are feeling ig[G]nored
[D]luscious ladies
want to be [G]adored

mascara eyes
stare a little too long
into a stranger’s face
until we both know
I will be driving
driving her home

[chorus]
[C]Sneaking out
[G]sneaking out
[C]Sneaking out
[G]won’t see us leave
[C]doing things that [D]you won’t see
[C]Sneaking out
and taking [D]her with [G]me

chop it all with a machete, repeat line 1 for line 2. Restrict lingo to only the act of sneaking out, not about the disco.

[G]Sneaking out, no better time to leave
[C]Sneaking out, no better time to [G]leave
[D]I’m stealing his girl
and taking her with [G]me

Disco dancing down at Daddy O’s
Disco dancing down at Daddy O’s
x
x

luscious ladies don’t want to be seen
luscious ladies don’t want to be seen
leaving by the back door

but would it be better with details about a specific person? One woman?





12/16/25

[G]I’ma arriving with my [C]hair on fire
[G]but you never hear me [D]say good bye
[C]you will never see me [G]leaving

[G]luscious ladies [C]don’t want to be seen
[G]following me [D] out the back door
[C]don’t want you to know I’m about to [G]score

[chorus]
[C]out Sneaking, out
[D]sneaking out
[G]so you won’t see me leaving
[C]sneaking, out
[D]sneaking out
[G]doing things that you won’t see, I’m a
[C]Sneaking out Sneaking out Sneaking out
and taking [D]her with [G]me

12/15/25 rewrite song to be about 1 lady to be more clear, 3 ladies is too much story. Try a different rhyme scheme to not sound like a nursery rhyme

[C]I set the world on fire [G]after I arrive
never shout or whisper [C]a single good bye

[F]when it’s time to go [C]departing is discreet
[G]lots of luscious ladies [C]don’t want to be seen

[C]following the hussy herd [G]trailing out the back door
they don’t want you to know [C]I’m about to score

[chorus]
Sneaking, out sneaking
out so you won’t see me leaving
sneaking, out sneaking
out [G]doing things that you won’t see
Sneaking out Sneaking out
Sneaking out and taking her with me

C, GC CE C 1, 51 13 1
C, CGC E C

[C]I set the world on fire [G]after I arrive
but you never see or hear [C]me say good bye

[F]when it’s time to leave [C]time to be discreet
[G]lots of luscious ladies [C]don’t want to be seen

[C]following the hussy herd [G]out the back door
trying not to tell everyone [C]I’m about to score

[chorus]
Sneaking, out sneaking
you won’t see me leaving
sneaking, out sneaking
[G]doing things that you can’t see
[C]sneaking out sneaking out
Sneaking out and taking her with me

if you measure a good time on a grayscale of crazy
Lots of luscious ladies like to leave with me
a better time is had when we teeter on a grayscale of crazy

believe, mystique, technique, freak, retreat, heat, lead, beat
maybe you see creeping
ladies see me discreetly slipping silently
slide into the street
sneaking
ducking out of work and she’s followin
parolee, between, mean, green, screen, queen, eighteen, unseen, the scene, bring, silently, quietly, party, tipsy, kissing, landing, believe, needing, tasty, repeating, keys, dreams, agrees, routine,
You still peacocking for the chick when I’ve already win and left fucking her out the back door. And she like it too. She likes the anonymity of not being seen as a winning prize to the biggest peacocker. Keeping business private and unseen is the ticket to a repeated good time. Being young but having the wise in my good-byes allows me to not have to compete when I sneak. I’m a dope ass player, you always see me arrive/come in, a pimp in the heat of the scene, and I’m always winning because I know how to leave.


[G]when it’s time to be [G]go[E]ing
you won’t see me [G]leave

Dancing at a party
getting groo-oo-vy
I’m sneaking, she’s following

[chorus]
[D]Sneaking Out, won’t [G]see me leave
[D]sneaking out, taking [G]her with me
[C]doing things that [D]you won’t see
[D]sneaking out, taking [G]her with me
[D] [G]

new girl at the company
she is working and flirting
I am going to get lucky
and sneaking for a quickie

[chorus]

[Bridge]
[Em]stealth machine (sneaking out)
[Am]always winning (sneaking out)
[B7]I am leaving secretly
[Em]

hot waitress at the eatery
she is pouring my coffee
and signaling me discreetly
we’re sneaking nobody looking

[chorus]

6/25/25

[G]Lots of luscious [G]lad[E]ies
like to leave with [C]me
[G]when it’s time to be [G]go[E]ing
you won’t see me [C]leave

Dancing at a party
seeing her see me
cutie is winking
I’m sneaking, she’s following

[chorus]
[D]Sneaking Out, won’t [G]see me leave
[D]sneaking out, taking [G]her with me
[C]doing things that [D]you won’t see
[D]sneaking out, taking [G]her with me
[D] [G]

new girl at the company
she is working and flirting
I am going to get lucky
and sneaking for a quickie

[chorus]

[Bridge]
[Em]stealth machine (sneaking out)
[Am]always winning (sneaking out)
[B7]I am leaving secretly
[Em]

hot waitress at the eatery
she is pouring my coffee
and signaling me discreetly
we’re sneaking nobody looking

[chorus]

6/9/25 NSAI comments: didn’t understand the story was 3 separate girls. Don’t use the word leave repeatedly in first verse. Like the melody, especially the low note at end of chorus. Remove sneaking out from bridge, you have it so many other places. (lots of luscious ladies) good literation. Love the sound effect on the bridge whisper.

cooking, your tips are not a lot of money

she’s fed up with work and pouring coffee and bad tips, little money

Wait, WHY do ladies leave with him? lucious ladies leave with me because I am discreet. Ladies have to protect their image as elusive and selective. Being discreet allows them to let their hair down and be themselves without judgement. They want to have a better time than where they are currently and are looking for a way out. sneaking out also avoids long, unnecessary goodbyes. Being discreet lets ladies know that I understand their problem and concerns, I am sensitive to their problems. I care about them and what is important to them.
BUT, the rest of the song is about him snacking on women, so he ain’t all that sensitive, a tom cat.

believe, mystique, technique, freak, retreat, heat, lead, beat
maybe you see creeping
ladies see me discreetly slipping silently
slide into the street
sneaking


6/8/25

[G]Lots of Lucious ladies
[C]like to leave with []me
[D]if you are watching
[C]you won’t see me leave

[G]Dance at a []party
[C]getting []groo-oo-vy
[D]kissing on a []hottie
[C]I’m sneaking, she’s [] following

[chorus]

[C]Sneaking Out, won’t [D]see me[C] leave
[C]sneaking out, taking [D]her with [C]me
[G]doing things that [D]you won’t see
[C]sneaking out, taking [D]her with [C]me
[C] [D] [C]

[G]working and flirting
[C]she keeps winking
[D]I am going to get lucky
[G]and sneaking for a quickie

[chorus]

[Bridge]
[Am]stealth machine (sneaking out)
[B7]always winning (sneaking out)
[Em]I’m leaving secretly
[C]sneaking out
[C]sneaking out

[G]waitress at the eatery
[C]she’s pouring coffee
[D]I am not thirsty
[G]she’s sneaking boss not looking

[chorus]

6/8/25

[Em]Lots of Lucious ladies
[D]like to leave with []me
[C]if you are watching
[G]you won’t see me leave

[Em]Dancing at a []party
[D]getting []groo-oo-vy
[C]kissing on a []hottie
[G]I’m sneaking, she’s [] following

[chorus]

[G]Sneaking Out, won’t see me [C]leave
[D]sneaking out, taking her with [G]me
[G]doing things that [C]you won’t see
[D]sneaking out, taking her with [G]me
[D]sneaking out, taking her with [G]me

[Em]I should be working
[D]she keeps winking
[C]gonna get lucky
[G]I’m sneaking for a quickie

[chorus]

[Bridge]
[Am]stealth machine (sneaking out)
[B7]always winning (sneaking out)
[Em]I’m leaving secretly
[C]sneaking out
[C]sneaking out

[Em]she’s working and flirting
[D]while pouring coffee
[C]I’m not thirsty
[G]I’m sneaking you’re not looking

[chorus]

6/6/25

[C]Lucious ladies
[G]like to leave with me
[F]when we leave
[C]you won’t see

[F]toasting at a party
[C]getting groovy
[G]kissing a hottie
[C]sneaking out she’s following me

[chorus]

[G]Sneaking Out, won’t [D]see me [G]leave
[G]sneaking out, taking [D]her with [G]me
[B]doing things that [F]you won’t [B]see
[G]sneaking out, taking [D]her with [G]me
[G]sneaking out, taking [D]her with [G]me

[C]Sneaking Out, won’t [G]see me [C]leave
[C]sneaking out, taking [G]her with [C]me
[F]doing things that [C]you won’t [F]see
[C]Sneaking Out and taking [G]her with [C]me
[C]Sneaking Out and taking [G]her with [C]me

or
[D]Sneak[X]ing [C]Out, won’t [G]see me [C]leaving
[D]sneak[X]ing [C]out, taking [G]her with [C]me
[F]doing things that [G]you won’t [F]see
[D]Sneak[X]ing [C]Out and taking [G]her with [C]me
[D]Sneak[X]ing [C]Out and taking [G]her with [C]me

she’s pouring coffee
working and flirting
I’m not thirsty
sneaking out nobody looking

[chorus]

[Bridge]
a stealth machine (sneaking out)
always winning (sneaking out)
leaving secretly
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [G]me
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [G]me

pretending I’m working
she keeps winking
gonna get lucky
sneaking out an early quickie

[chorus]

6/5/25 cut 50% of the words

[D]Lucious ladies like to [G]leave with [D]me
[D]I don’t believe in [A]peacock[D]ing like to leave with me
[D]time to leave [G]time to be [D]discreet when we leave
[D]leave unseen leave [A]quiet[D]ly we like to be discreet

making a toast at the neighbor’s party at a party
when did their girl become a hottie getting groovy
our eyes meet without speaking kissing a hottie
sneaking out she’s following me

[chorus]
[G]sneaking out
[C]won’t see me [G]leave
sneaking out
taking her with me
sneaking out
doing things that you won’t see
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [D]me
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [D]me

hired a new girl at the company I am working
hot and sexy and she keeps winking
gonna get lucky so I stop working
is it too early sneaking out for an early quickie

[chorus]

[Bridge]
[Am]sneaking out
[D]I’m a stealth machine
sneaking out
always winning
sneaking out
I leave secretly
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [G]me

daddy’s diner she’s stuck pouring coffee she’s paid to pour coffee
flirts with me until I’m smiling working and flirting
drop the menu I’m not hungry now I’m not thirsty
sneaking out daddy’s not looking sneaking out nobody looking

[chorus]

6/5/25

[D]Lucious ladies like to [G]leave with [D]me
[D]I don’t believe in [A]peacock[D]ing
[D]time to leave [G]time to be [D]discreet
[D]leave unseen leave [A]quiet[D]ly

making a toast at the neighbor’s party
when did their girl become a hottie
our eyes meet without speaking
sneaking out she’s following me

[chorus]
[G]sneaking out
[C]won’t see me [G]leave
[D]sneaking out
taking [A]her with [D]me
[G]doing things [C]you won’t [G]see
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [G]me

hired a new girl at the company
hot and sexy and she keeps winking
gonna get lucky so I stop working
is it too early for a quickie

[chorus]

[Bridge]
[Am]sneaking out
[D]I’m a stealth machine
always winning
I leave secretly
[G]doing things [A]you won’t see
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [G]me

daddy’s diner she’s stuck pouring coffee
flirts with me until I’m smiling
drop the menu I’m not hungry
sneaking out daddy’s not looking

[chorus]

D A GDG

6/4/25

[G]Lucious [D]ladies like to [C]leave with [D]me
[G]I don’t [D]believe in [D]pea[E]cock[G]ing
[D]time to [C]leave [D]time to be dis[G]creet
[G]leave un[D]seen [C]leave [D]quiet[G]ly

making a toast at the neighbor’s party
when did daughter become a hottie
our eyes meet without speaking
sneaking out she’s following me

[chorus]
[C]sneaking [F]out
[G]won’t see me [C]leave
[C]sneaking [F]out
taking [G]her [D]with [C]me
[F]doing [C]things you [F]won’t [C]see
[C]sneaking [F]out taking [G]her [D]with [C]me

boss they hired a girl at the company
hot and sexy and she keeps winking
gonna get lucky so I stop working
is it too early for a quickie

[chorus]

[Bridge]
[Am]sneaking out
I’m a stealth machine
always winning
I leave secretly
doing things you won’t see
[C]sneaking out [F]taking [G]her with [C]me

daddy’s diner she’s stuck pouring coffee
flirts with me until I’m smiling
drop the menu I’m not hungry
sneaking out daddy’s not looking

[chorus]

outtro?

6/3/25 Doug visit

[D]Lucious ladies like to [G]leave with [D]me
they see my big feet and [A]call me daddy
I don’t believe in peacocking
like to be discreet when leaving the scene

toasting at the neighbor’s party
when did their girl become a hottie
her eyes meet mine very discreetly
sneaking out the back she’s following me

[chorus]
[G]sneaking out
won’t [C]see me [G]leave
[D]sneaking out
taking [A]her with [D]me
[G]doing things [A]you won’t [G]see
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [D]me
[D]sneaking out taking [A]her with [D]me

[Bridge]
[Bm]sneaking [A]out
I’m a stealth machine
always winning
when I leave secretly
doing things you won’t see
[D]sneaking out [A]taking her with [D]me
[D]sneaking out [A]taking her with [D]me

boss they hired a girl at the company
hot and sexy and she is winking
gonna get lucky so I stop working
is it too early for a quickie

her daddy’s diner she’s stuck pouring coffee
she is flirting now I’m smiling
drop the menu I’m not hungry
sneaking out daddy’s not looking

[chorus]

outtro?


6/2/25

Lucious ladies like to leave with me
they see my big feet and call me daddy
I don’t believe in peacocking
like to be discreet when leaving the scene

toasting at the neighbor’s party
when did their daughter become a hottie
her eyes meet me without speaking
cutting out the back she’s following me

[chorus]
sneaking out
won’t see me leave
sneaking out
taking her with me
doing things you won’t see
sneaking out taking her with me
sneaking out
I’m a stealth machine
always winning
when I leave secretly
doing things you won’t see
sneaking out taking her with me

boss hired a new girl at the company
hot and sexy and she is winking
I am giving her my training
gonna get lucky don’t feel like working

I’m pretending to go and get something
she meets me to the back of the company
quietly grabbing my keys
and we keep on going

[chorus]

at her daddy’s diner she’s stuck pouring coffee
mean people sipping and forget the tipping
and began flirting when I started smiling
I put down the menu no longer hungry
out the door when daddy’s not looking

[chorus]


including
disappearing
faking
keep on going
fooling around instead of working
having lots of fun instead of working
need of training
steamy
we’re out playing instead of working
a thing
lucky
ducking out of work and she’s followin
parolee, between, mean, green, screen, queen, eighteen, unseen, the scene, bring, silently, quietly, party, tipsy, kissing, landing, believe, needing, tasty, repeating, keys, dreams, agrees, routine,

5/31/25, 6/1/25

Lucious ladies like to leave with me
a bad ass cracker jack with big feet
I’m a good-looking mo’ fo’ with big feet
calling me daddy charming when they see my big feet
they see my big feet and call me daddy
I don’t believe in peacocking
like to be discreet when leaving the scene

toasting at the neighbor’s party
when did their daughter become a hottie
her eyes meet me without speaking
cutting out the back she’s following me
retreating out the back unseen

[chorus]
sneaking out
won’t see me leave
sneaking out
taking her with me
doing things you won’t see
sneaking out taking her with me
sneaking out
I’m a stealth machine
always winning
when I leave secretly
doing things you won’t see
sneaking out taking her with me

hired a new girl in the company
she’s winking and I don’t feel like I’m not working
I’m pretending to go get something
quietly grab my keys and keep on going


working like a dog on the dirty shift
flirting with cutie pie I can’t resist
buddies cover me in case I’m missed
ducking out of work to scratch my itch

[chorus]

married woman with a hot romance
Ms. Johnson may I have this dance
she grabbed my butt and felt my flask
sneaky cats jumpin’ out the back

leaning on the back door of the building
scratching at some green instead of working
cutting out the stems and all the seeds
first I’m smoking then I’m passing
screens,


5/30/25

lusty women like to leave with me
because they see I am discreet
I don’t believe in peacocking
Keep business private and unseen

toasting a cutie at the elite party
the boss’s daughter is the queen
with just a look she will follow me
retreating out the back unseen


getting out before the fat lady sings
in a sea of suitors competing
the wise in my good-byes allows me to not have to compete when I sneak.

[chorus]
sneaking out
won’t see me leave
sneaking out
taking her with me
doing things you won’t see
sneaking out taking her with me

sneaking out
I’m a stealth machine
always winning
when I leave secretly
doing things you won’t see
sneaking out taking her with me

working like a dog on the dirty shift
flirting with cutie pie I can’t resist
buddies cover me in case I’m missed
ducking out of work to scratch my itch

[chorus]

married woman with a hot romance
Ms. Johnson may I have this dance
she grabbed my butt and felt my flask
sneaky cats jumpin’ out the back

leading to dreams they believe
retreating from a party of elite

into the hood
out back smacking like alley cats chasing love and stuck in heat

a pimp in the heat of the scene
I’m always winning because I know how to leave

I love this, but it doesn’t advance this story:
while a streaming society
is snorting up social from the screen

also a disconnect of plural in the verse, but singular in the chorus?
lusty women leave with me
because they believe I am discreet

you won’t see my obscene
number of queens trailing me
retreating from elite parties
to get nasty in the street

my wood is misunderstood I’m always doing what I should

5/29/25 can you channel your inner kid rock and make it more rap like and bad boy like? Tell more about the hero and his questionable character.

misunderstood, not always doing what I should, I like lusty women, a lot of them, simple love is pure and free, I like them and they like me. Be too outwardly with this simple belief and be judged by society, but keep it on the down low let’s me score more women. Yes I can be outwardly with it, but why fight an uphill battle when I can get more by being less visible and scarce. I’m not cowardly, that’s not it, I just want more pussy. I can silently herd the hussys and have them all to myself instead of inciting a competition of dicks. I stay stealth like and I score more women, I don’t need male endorsements. I’m stealth, I’m chill, I’m quiet about it and that’s worth more in the score. While other males are puffing up their chest in a show down, I’m quietly shrinking to the background and walking off into the night, or horizon because it don’t matter what stinking time of the day it is. becoming invisible lets me score while others fight it out I’m already gone. You still peacocking for the chick when I’ve already win and left fucking her out the back door. And she like it too. She likes the anonymity of not being seen as a winning prize to the biggest peacocker. Keeping business private and unseen is the ticket to a repeated good time. Being young but having the wise in my good-byes allows me to not have to compete when I sneak. I’m a dope ass player, you always see me arrive/come in, a pimp in the heat of the scene, and I’m always winning because I know how to leave.

5/29/25 feels like need another verse before going to the 1st chorus. What does this dog want to say to set up the story? He’s just a hound dog that likes the girls, but WHY does he feel he has to sneak out?

  • when we’re ready to leave, we don’t want to be delayed
  • we don’t want people giving us a hard time for leaving too early
  • we don’t want people to see us taking the girl because we take so many girls
  • so he must care a little bit about what people think of him, and of the girl
  • He keeps his activities under cover so he can keep doing it

OR

lengthen the chorus instead of another verse?

also, there’s 3 lines about a lame ass party, and only 1 line about a girl making the transition into the chorus feel abrupt, so more about the girl? Make 1st line of song more compelling.

when did their daughter become a hottie
they don’t know to keep her away from me
she came on to me, but I’ll get the blame
so find the back door and avoid the shame

Is it still about too many things? too many girls? should story be about 1 girl? story stays about him being a hound dog?

5/19/25

I’m stuck at the neighbor’s lame ass party
too many cars and bad music thumping
food’s all gone and kegs are empty
when did their daughter become a hottie

[chorus]
sneakin out
won’t see me leave
sneakin out
taking her with me
doing things you can’t won’t see
sneakin out taking her with me

[chorus]

working like a dog on the dirty shift
flirting with cutie pie I can’t resist
buddies cover me in case I’m missed
ducking out of work to scratch my itch

[chorus]

married woman with a hot romance
Ms. Johnson may I have this dance
she grabbed my butt and felt my flask
sneaky cats jumpin’ out the back

5/18/25

after lunch I’m skipping class
see a girl with no hall pass
breaking the rules leaving school
fooling around all afternoon

[chorus]
sneakin out
won’t see me leave
sneakin out
taking her with me
sneakin out
doing things you can’t see
sneak-in-out
taking her with me

working like a dog on the dirty shift
flirting with cutie pie I can’t resist
buddies cover me in case I’m missed
ducking out of work to scratch my itch

[chorus]

married woman with a hot romance
Ms. Johnson may I have this dance
she grabbed my butt and felt my flask
sneaky cats jumpin’ out the back

[chorus]

5/16/25

YAY! the song is about him taking the girl.

sneakin out
won’t see me leave
sneakin out
taking her with me
sneakin out
doing things you can’t see
sneak-in-out
taking her with me

VERSES
da ta da-dah da dah dah dah

after lunch skip gym class
meet a girl with no hall pass
breaking the rules leaving school
riding around like supercool
not adult enough like the other 2 verses
afternoon, disapprove, cruise, ensued, cute,
fooling around all afternoon

working like a dog on the dirty shift
flirting with cutie pie I can’t resist
buddies cover me in case I’m missed
ducking out of work to scratch my itch

married woman with a hot romance
Ms. Johnson may I have this dance
she grabbed my butt and felt my flask
sneaky cats jumpin’ out the back

chorus is not saying anything

ADD VERBAL CHATTER adding to cadence. Nonsensical breaks the pattern of saying nothing.

sneaking out
the back door
sneaking out
the back door
sneaking out so I can score
sneaking out the back door

sneaking out
sneakin it sneakin it
sneaking out
sneakin it sneakin it
sneaking out so I can score
sneaking out the back door

sneakinit out the back door
sneakinit out the back door
sneakinit out so I can score
sneakinit out the back door
sneakinit back door
sneakinit back door
sneakinit can score
sneakinit out the back door

SNEAK IN OUT (emphasis on opposites: in/out). too singy-songy for lyrics.

[chorus]
sneak in out
sneakin out
sneakin out
the back door (sneakin it sneakin it)
sneakin out
sneakin out
sneakin out
the back door (sneakin it sneakin it)

be the sneak
not a peep

can’t be loud
not a sound
sneaking out
to score (sneakin it sneakin it)
sneakin out
sneakin out
sneakin out
the back door

5/15/25

after lunch I’ma skip gym class
meet a girl with no hall pass
breaking the rules leaving school
riding around like supercool

[chorus]
sneakin’ out
sneakin out
sneakin out
the back door
sneakin out
sneakin out
you know
what for

dippin’ out
steppin’ out
rollin’ out
so I can score
sneakin out
sneakin out
sneaking out
the back door

[chorus]

working like a dog on the dirty shift
flirting with cutie pie can’t resist
buddies cover me if I’m missed
ducking out of work to scratch my itch

[chorus]

married woman with a hot romance
Mrs. Johnson may I have this dance
she grabbed my junk she felt my flask
sneaky cats tip toe out back

5/11/25

after lunch it’s time to skip gym class
meet a girl
leave school
going out the front will get caught
slip out back instead

[chorus]
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the back door
I’m sneaking out
never done it before
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the back door
I sneak out
so I can score
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the back door
I’m sneaking out
the back door

[chorus]

down at the store I’m working a shift
another hour before its time to quit
(meets a chick,
describe her)
my buddy can cover if the boss too strict
ducking out of work to meet this chick

[chorus]

party in the club I meet a new girl
but she’s with somebody
smoking hot
describe her
I showed her my flask
said meet me out back

(scoring a drug is not is not a chick, keep story to 1 thing)
down at the club
to score my drug
I look around
my drug I found
I reach for cash in my sack
he said not here, meet me out back

flask, back, distract, snack, react, attract,

teenage lust is on fire
waiting for parents to get tired
old folks so judgemental
but this love is something special

A woman drags her love to church again
but he’s bet all his money on the game
just a quick look, who is winning

5/10/25 in my socks Sliding across the room like I’m in a movie
Sometimes I can’t take it no more
There are some days when I’ve just had enough
Go back to original story, with people, show 3 different ways to score.

5/10/25 still too telling instead of showing? Not a close up look at a personal story that would connect with people? How would Bobby Rush tell the story?

Also sneaking out the back door could be interpreted as the cheater sneaking out the back door of their lovers, which was unintended and clouds the story?

5/10/25

tip toe across the floor
avoiding squeaky boards
floorboards to step over
back door is getting closer

2 boards over, then down four
counting boards now a sport
zero squeaks and good form
wins you the back door award

[chorus]
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the back door
I sneak out
so I can score
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the back door
I’m sneaking out
the back door

don’t wear anything jingly
too many keys or stupid jewelry
have to be quiet
put the phone on silent

[chorus]
sliding socks on the floor
carry shoes to the door
put them on as I step out
that’s how I vanish from the house

[chorus]



When I want to disappear
don’t want anyone to hear
me getting out of the house
here’s my secrets for sneaking out

when I want to leave the hous
sound, house, out, allowed, loud, whereabout, thereabout,
back and forth score stored worn chores drawer
shoes, cruise, choose, through, used, approves, disapproves, smooths

5/9/25

THE BACKDOOR, OUT THE BACKDOOR,

or never tell WHY he’s sneaking out, just all the tactics and antics that help him sneak out the back door.

how I keep my shoes at the back door. so I can walk silently to the door.

[chorus]

sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the back door
I tip toe
across the floor
sneaking out the back door
I sneak out
so I can score
sneaking out the back door

avoiding squeaky floorboards. counts the number of boards to step over.

sport, award,
count, out

[chorus]

oil on the screen door. oil can stays on the back porch.

noise, avoid, oil,

[chorus]

sock sliding on
the shiny

5/9/25 self edits.

Pick up my clothes and make my bed
hearing all the things mother said
across the street I’m at a friends
playing video games instead
age related topic is too confusing. make about the putang.

[chorus] good finally

sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the back door
have to tip toe
across the floor

socks sliding on
the slippery floor

sneaking out the back door
sneaking out
so I can score
sneaking out the back door

My heart in love with a rebel
parents treat love like it’s the devil lets not
old folks so judgemental
but this love is something special

[chorus]

Loving my old ball and chain
drag me out to church again
preacher says my ways are profane
but profane is how I entertain show profane

[chorus]

5/8/25

sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the back door
tip toeing across the floor
sneaking out so I can score

sneaking out the back door
done it many times before
sneaking out so I can score
sneaking out the back door

Sneaking out of the house
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out of the house
sneaking without a sound
tip toe across the floor
sneak out so I can score
sneaking out sneaking out
sneaking out of the house

Sneaking out of the house
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out of the house
sneaking without a sound
tip toe across the floor
sneak out so I can score
sneaking out sneaking out
sneaking out of the house

sneaking out the back door
Sneaking out the house
sneaking out the back door
don’t make any noise
tip toeing across the floor
sneaking out so I can score
sneaking out sneaking out
sneaking out the back door

Sneaking out of the house
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out of the house
can’t make any noise
tip toeing across the floor
sneaking out so I can score
sneaking out sneaking out
sneaking out the back door

Sneaking out the house now, baby
sneaking out the back door
sneaking out the house now, baby
can’t make any noise
tip toeing across the floor
sneaking out so I can score
sneaking out sneaking out
sneaking out the back door

5/5/25

Pick up my clothes and make my bed
doing all the things mother said
across the street I’m at a friends
playing video games instead

[chorus]
Sneaking out the back door
Sneaking tip toe the floor like I did before
Sneaking out so I can score
Sneaking out the back door
Sneak sneak sneak, out the back door

tip toe across the floor
avoid squeeky boards

A young heart in love with a rebel
parents treat love like it’s a devil
old folks so judgemental
but this love is something special

[chorus]

I love my old ball and chain
drag me out to church again
preacher says my ways are profane
but profane is how I entertain

[chorus]


tip toeing across the floor
step over squeaky boards

5/4/25

I’m sneaking out the back door, tip toeing across the kitchen floor, avoiding all the squeaky boards, cuz I’m sneaking out the back door. Works as a chorus, now why might I be sneaking out the back door? A historic look over a lifetime of sneaking out?

  • young kid done his chores, sneaking out to neighbor’s to play video games.
  • teenager sneaking out to meet young love.
  • spouse sneaking out to go drinking and playing cards with buddies, to get away from kids and wife. He views it as his ‘me’ time, knowing he will get an earful when returning. Sneaking out, it’s about the act of getting away from routine homelife. A break. A vacation without leaving. A mind release. Forget about it for a while.

Sneaking, out the back door
Sneaking, across the floor
Sneaking over squeaky boards
Sneaking, out the back door

Sneaking, like I did before
Sneaking, out once more
Sneaking out so I can score
Sneaking, out the back door

Pick up clothes and make my bed
doing things mother said
across the street at a friends
playing video games instead

A young heart falls for the rebel
parents treat love like it’s the devil
old folks so judgemental
but this love is something special

drinking, playing cards, poker, gambling, smoking, cussing, playing music, picking, fishing, sneaking out of church

I love my old ball and chain
dragging me out to church again
smoking and cussing are profane
drinking and playing cards is how I entertain